DANGEROUS
The shape of a man with a knife silhouetted
against a white wall streaked with BLOOD, a
lifeless girl’s body lying on the ground at his feet. If anyone tries to come
near, he either points his knife at them, or stabs them too.
By: Phoebe
Oh Phoebe this is pretty gruesome! But I would have to say that the writing is very descriptive, especially the first phrase, and really brings the reader into the "picture". Mrs. Dudley
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